Prompt:
1985. A critic
has said that one important measure of a superior work of literature is its
ability to produce in the reader a healthy confusion of pleasure and
disquietude. Select a literary work that produces this "healthy
confusion." Write an essay in which you explain the sources of the
"pleasure and disquietude" experienced by the readers of the work.
Response:
In his essay, A Modest Proposal, Jonathan Swift draws
rhetorical power from his satirical solution to a socioeconomic problem in
Ireland. His distasteful idea that children of the poor should be eaten may initially
cause disgust, but also, in the context of the satire, evokes an uneasy sort of
humorous response. The effectiveness of the work hinges on the revulsion
generated by the proposed cannibalism, tempered by the comedy arising from the
ludicrous nature of the idea.
In order to mock the poor treatment of the lower classes in
Ireland, Swift exaggerates the existing policies by suggesting that children of
the poor should be eaten directly, as the effect is really no different. He
continues this satire throughout the essay, remarking that the poor could sell
children to the rich, thus providing relief from their own economic struggles
and food for the upper classes. The population would also then be controlled. Though
the essay is a satire, the idea of infanticide and cannibalism evokes disgust
toward the author and generates sympathy for the Irish poor. Swift himself
implies strongly that this effect is intended, as he was not able to stir up
any actual reform in the past when he presented the problem seriously. Swift
hopes that the reader will be motivated by this disgust to take action, rather
than passively read and move on.
However, A Modest Proposal is a satire, and does
create some sort of humorous reaction in the reader. Were Swift sincerely
suggesting that children born to impoverished families be eaten, he likely
would have been locked up, at the very least. Instead, he plays up the
satirical nature of the essay, making over-the-top computations detailing how
many children would be sold, how many they would feed, and how much money the
sale would generate. At the end of the essay, Swift comments that he has no
children and will not have any in the future, so the concerns of a parent do
not even apply to him. He also wittily pokes fun at England and Irish
landlords, which have, figuratively speaking, already been doing to the poor
what Swift is suggesting. These points of satire generate humor, balancing the
inhumanity of the solution Swift suggests, but they also give the essay greater
impact. By so calmly laying out this plan to murder and eat children, Swift
emphasizes the impersonal, cruel treatment of the poor. He himself – who already
appears antagonistic – claims to be far removed from the effects of his
solution, just as England and the Irish rich are.
The humor in A Modest Proposal counterbalances the
disgusting nature of the policy Swift suggests, but also makes its effect on
the reader more powerful. Posing his arguments as satire allows Swift to take
them to extremes, truly highlighting the suffering of the Irish poor as well as
the callousness of those imposing it on them. The reader may feel a humorous
response to the satire, but likely in a hesitant way, fully aware of the actual
problems the Irish poor are facing.
Awesome job Mayank! This essay is wonderful. It was very structured and I could follow exactly what it was saying. The evidence and the warrants were clear and made complete sense. A Modest Proposal was perfect for this prompt. One thing that I think might be good for you to focus on is simplifying your language (mostly in the first paragraph). Like the author of Nuts and Bolts said, the more simple your language is, the better!
ReplyDeleteThis is impressive, and I'm struggling to find anything wrong with it. It's always great to have quotes, so including a few would strengthen your argument even more. I really love that you chose A Modest Proposal for this prompt--it's absolutely perfect! Great work!
ReplyDeleteHey Mayank,
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I also found it very difficult to find anything wrong with your essay. I agree with Breckan though, having quotes in your essay will help a lot with your essay.
Matt